Feedback on premiliminary task

Today I was given feedback on my preliminary task and I got a chance to see what it could have done better on my preliminary task so I could make sure I could develop and avoid any problems in my main coursework task. For my preliminary task School/College magazine I got 42/50. I was given both positive and constructive criticism for my magazine cover.

Firstly I will start with the positives of my final product. I was told by my teacher that the colour schemes on the front page were good. The mix of blues, blacks and whites fitted the purpose of the task. Also, the highlighting of the title and images on the front page was effective and created an impact. Generally, the actual task itself was produced to a satisfactory level. However, there were minor faults in my work that were highlighted in order for me to know so i didnt commit the same faults in my main task. One fault was the Lack of variation of fonts and font sizes. They were very similiar and it was clear that it did not follow the industry conventions. Also, for the pictures, there wasnt a variation of shot distances and types. Tghis is something important to include and adjust in my main task to get the highest mark possible. In a nutshell, my layout and text choices for my main task have to be thought about very carefully and constant surveying of my work has to be done to ensure everything is spotted and for my work to be the best it can.